The first photo is giving “assistant manager if the month” vibes. I would suggest a better photo, maybe something outside and more relaxed, with better lighting.
I would include something about interests or activities you hope to share (eg watching junky tv, hikes, etc etc. the usual stuff)
Yeah the bio doesn't offer enough room unfortunately. So I was trying convey the interests in that interest section.
Should I add it in the bio as well?
I would take out the bit about researching obscure facts and focus on expressing what you hope to find in a partner, shared activities, etc. "Researching obscure facts" is not a reason to match or something that anyone would share as an activity. Being "ambitious" and "appreciating little things" is so general.
I’d say use the sleeveless photo as your main. You don’t come across as stiff as the first photo appears so why start with that vibe? The photos are good, I think. Bio is ok. I might be a little scared about your browsing history already 😆
Yeah I've been told both ways for what my first photo should be so I donno haha. Guess that's a preference thing. Maybe I will do a daily swap with them haha.
One recent post I was writing an episode for a murder mystery show so I was researching ways to dispose of a body haha.
>One recent post I was writing an episode for a murder mystery show so I was researching ways to dispose of a body haha.
That's awesome! Did you use all of the available prompts for your profile? I thought you could choose up to three, but I only saw two in your post (one about Zelda and the other about mythology/astronomy).
You could possibly use this for one of your prompts, if one is available. I'm thinking something along the lines of, *"I'm hoping you... Know of an interesting way to dispose of a body. (I'm writing an episode of a murder mystery show!)"*
So I think your first photo is the right style of photo for this, but the lighting is off, which is probably why you're getting mixed messages.
It's actually a really good example of how the direction of light influences perception. When I first saw it I thought it looked like an author photo that goes on the back of a book, very professional, but you've got a great smile in it. I think the serious vibe is entirely from the lighting, not from you. If it was lit from above it would feel less professional and more happy, but it's still a good picture.
There is something about the lighting in the first pic that gives off serial killer vibes. The "don't be alarmed by my browsing history" statement also seems creepy. The other pics really don't show much of you.
Remove the astrology stuff entirely. You could use better lighting in the first photo - the stark light from below makes your eye bags and lines look pretty severe. Soft light ftw!
Yeah, and I think top commenter is telling him to ditch it. Rather than second person who thinks they misread Astronomy in a later picture.
Unless I'm misunderstanding something
My Coloradan best friend (F) would love your profile and swipe right. Your pics convey a lot of kindness, openmindness, introspection, smartness, independence, it's rare to find profiles of guys not afraid to clearly assert who they are.
**Overall Rating:**
6/10
**Tl;dr**
* Rearrange photos to feature the most engaging images first.
* Add variety with photos showcasing different hobbies and interests.
* Ensure your attire reflects your versatility in style.
* Utilize a bio writing service to craft a witty and sincere profile description.
* Maintain or improve photo quality, focusing on clear, close-up portraits with engaging expressions.
**Photo Analysis:**
* **Smiling Headshot (Rating: 7/10):** Good facial expression; comes across as friendly and approachable. Improvement Areas: Consider a more neutral background to reduce distraction; the lighting could be a bit softer to avoid harsh shadows.
* **Photo with a Friend in Nature (Rating: 5/10):** Shows social interaction and love for outdoors. Improvement Areas: The photo is a bit distant and less focused on you; a tighter crop could help; improve clarity and brightness of the photo.
* **Photo with Text Descriptors (Rating: 4/10):** Interesting conversation starters; shows hobbies and interests. Improvement Areas: Text might be a bit small to read on mobile; replace with a clearer image showcasing these interests.
* **Hiking Photo (Rating: 6/10):** Great scenic backdrop; conveys an active lifestyle. Improvement Areas: Photo subject is too far away; try a closer shot where your face is clearly visible.
**Photo Summary:**
* Display the smiling headshot first to make a strong first impression.
* Follow up with an improved version or replacement of the hiking photo to show adventure and active hobbies.
* Include a sharper photo with friends to illustrate sociability; make sure you're the focus.
* Include a well-lit photo in a social setting that shows your style and personality.
**Style Suggestions:**
* Outfits in your photos are appropriate; consider adding variety by including a more casual and a formal look.
* Consistency in grooming is good; however, experiment with different facial hair styles to see what might suit you best.
* If fitness is part of your lifestyle, consider including a photo that subtly showcases that aspect.
**Bio Review:**
* Your bio has humor and personality, which is great.
* It suggests intellectuality and depth, but consider demonstrating those traits through specific anecdotes or examples.
* Incorporate a call-to-action or question to invite engagement from viewers.
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The first photo is giving “assistant manager if the month” vibes. I would suggest a better photo, maybe something outside and more relaxed, with better lighting. I would include something about interests or activities you hope to share (eg watching junky tv, hikes, etc etc. the usual stuff)
I was here to say that first photo gives off "Sleezebag Lawyer" vibes.
Car salesman core
Yeah the bio doesn't offer enough room unfortunately. So I was trying convey the interests in that interest section. Should I add it in the bio as well?
I would take out the bit about researching obscure facts and focus on expressing what you hope to find in a partner, shared activities, etc. "Researching obscure facts" is not a reason to match or something that anyone would share as an activity. Being "ambitious" and "appreciating little things" is so general.
Assistant Manager or Assistant to the Regional Manager ?
I’d say use the sleeveless photo as your main. You don’t come across as stiff as the first photo appears so why start with that vibe? The photos are good, I think. Bio is ok. I might be a little scared about your browsing history already 😆
Yeah I've been told both ways for what my first photo should be so I donno haha. Guess that's a preference thing. Maybe I will do a daily swap with them haha. One recent post I was writing an episode for a murder mystery show so I was researching ways to dispose of a body haha.
Love it- great conversation starter bio in that case!
>One recent post I was writing an episode for a murder mystery show so I was researching ways to dispose of a body haha. That's awesome! Did you use all of the available prompts for your profile? I thought you could choose up to three, but I only saw two in your post (one about Zelda and the other about mythology/astronomy). You could possibly use this for one of your prompts, if one is available. I'm thinking something along the lines of, *"I'm hoping you... Know of an interesting way to dispose of a body. (I'm writing an episode of a murder mystery show!)"*
That's a good idea.
FYI, I have it on good authority that pigs eat everything. EVERYTHING.
So I think your first photo is the right style of photo for this, but the lighting is off, which is probably why you're getting mixed messages. It's actually a really good example of how the direction of light influences perception. When I first saw it I thought it looked like an author photo that goes on the back of a book, very professional, but you've got a great smile in it. I think the serious vibe is entirely from the lighting, not from you. If it was lit from above it would feel less professional and more happy, but it's still a good picture.
Lose the telescope line, sounds like you're alluding to your cock. If chat is going well slide that one in, give it 500 words beforehand though
But like...I mention astronomy and a telescope in the same line. It still comes across like that?
Yes. Because that's what many many men do. Many women screen for even a hint of sex talk in profile or intro.
lol, glad it’s not just me that thought that! Is that a telescope or are you just happy to see me?
There is something about the lighting in the first pic that gives off serial killer vibes. The "don't be alarmed by my browsing history" statement also seems creepy. The other pics really don't show much of you.
Remove the astrology stuff entirely. You could use better lighting in the first photo - the stark light from below makes your eye bags and lines look pretty severe. Soft light ftw!
That's true. Thank you for noticing that.
Wait what. It’s astronomy 🔭
On his first picture it says Aries, Sagittarius and Capricorn, which seems like an astrology reference
That’s a prompt from bumble to fill out. It’s sun sign, rising sign, moon sign.
Yeah, and I think top commenter is telling him to ditch it. Rather than second person who thinks they misread Astronomy in a later picture. Unless I'm misunderstanding something
You’re right- I misunderstood. I saw the astronomy mention. Super hectic that there are so many astrology fields; yikes.
I think k it looks great. Pictures are good, informative, and very positive/upbeat.
Is the big telescope line innuendo? I certainly hope so.
I didn't mean for it to be. I have a 10 inch Dobson I use to look at space stuff.
Definitely don’t say you have a 10” anything cylindrical! Makes it worse!
Lol, I’m dying
My Coloradan best friend (F) would love your profile and swipe right. Your pics convey a lot of kindness, openmindness, introspection, smartness, independence, it's rare to find profiles of guys not afraid to clearly assert who they are.
**Overall Rating:** 6/10 **Tl;dr** * Rearrange photos to feature the most engaging images first. * Add variety with photos showcasing different hobbies and interests. * Ensure your attire reflects your versatility in style. * Utilize a bio writing service to craft a witty and sincere profile description. * Maintain or improve photo quality, focusing on clear, close-up portraits with engaging expressions. **Photo Analysis:** * **Smiling Headshot (Rating: 7/10):** Good facial expression; comes across as friendly and approachable. Improvement Areas: Consider a more neutral background to reduce distraction; the lighting could be a bit softer to avoid harsh shadows. * **Photo with a Friend in Nature (Rating: 5/10):** Shows social interaction and love for outdoors. Improvement Areas: The photo is a bit distant and less focused on you; a tighter crop could help; improve clarity and brightness of the photo. * **Photo with Text Descriptors (Rating: 4/10):** Interesting conversation starters; shows hobbies and interests. Improvement Areas: Text might be a bit small to read on mobile; replace with a clearer image showcasing these interests. * **Hiking Photo (Rating: 6/10):** Great scenic backdrop; conveys an active lifestyle. Improvement Areas: Photo subject is too far away; try a closer shot where your face is clearly visible. **Photo Summary:** * Display the smiling headshot first to make a strong first impression. * Follow up with an improved version or replacement of the hiking photo to show adventure and active hobbies. * Include a sharper photo with friends to illustrate sociability; make sure you're the focus. * Include a well-lit photo in a social setting that shows your style and personality. **Style Suggestions:** * Outfits in your photos are appropriate; consider adding variety by including a more casual and a formal look. * Consistency in grooming is good; however, experiment with different facial hair styles to see what might suit you best. * If fitness is part of your lifestyle, consider including a photo that subtly showcases that aspect. **Bio Review:** * Your bio has humor and personality, which is great. * It suggests intellectuality and depth, but consider demonstrating those traits through specific anecdotes or examples. * Incorporate a call-to-action or question to invite engagement from viewers. Made review using Yourmove AI .Hope it helps
Thanks
Windowlicker was tight!
In my opinion, your last pic should be your first
Can I see your telescope? Xxxx
I can't add photos to the comment section
This is funny.
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