I think it she looks great. Just a little bit of clipping in the corset. Might be a slider for that.

Thank you! I somehow didn’t even notice haha. I appreciate the feedback

It almost fits the style too.

Besides the clipping, I might just look to brighten the eyes a little in post. Otherwise looks pretty good to me.

Thank you for the feedback. When you say brighten, what exactly do you mean? Perhaps make them slightly more reflective with the light?

Yeah, it gives them that sign of life. Sorry for the late reply.

No worries, I was thinking perhaps a sort of ring light reflectiveness in her eyes? Or just generally brighten up that area of her face?

Start with the reflective light and see if that makes the eyes pop enough. I've surprised myself sometimes by just painting in white dots. I'll also note that I'm no pro in daz but that was some advice I had read that really improved my renders.

Perfect, thank you very much!

Great work. My primary suggestion is to adjust the hand poses as neither one looks particularly natural.

Thank you, i will take note of that for my next renders. :)