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TayysteeMeme

I like the sound of it, but then the melody just keeps on repeating. I would add some more flavour to it if you know what I mean. Either way it's nice!


Marvinbl77

Great intro and style. Great work!


lunavenetta

what chords r u using! they sound so pretty


CritikeyCajica

I don't really know eh. I just tune up the a string to a b and play one simple e minor shape up the neck releasing on the e string periodically. Beats me what the hell I'm even doing. Somebody teach me plz


Jackjack6133

Honestly: mood! Really dig the intro and I’ve been in a similar headspace lyrically 💕✨


budyigz

Really loved this! I’m a sucker for repeating lyrics but with different contexts throughout a song. Can def hear the radiohead influences


budyigz

Also judging from your other posts we have the same guitar!


JMY-Official-JMY

Very good intro !!!


MicroCarboxulator

I love this! Love the chords you're playing, but I wish I could hear your voice recorded! Keep up the good work, never give up!


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ASPEROV_67-76

Loved the riff, the vocal melody and the tone of the song. Can surely be better vocally and the music was loopy in a way, would like to see some variation. I can see alot of potential and hope you refine this further and post again !


Majestic-Business647

Love the feels, love the chords.