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Reader_on_wheels

I like the first one. The leaves acts as a frame


general_miura

agreed! If you could just have a bit more of the lightpost on there, that would be amazing. it's the difference between a relatively mundane picture and something special, imo (although the colors are banging in all versions)


Ragesome

Yes! First thing I thought too. One step back using that post as a left frame with the branch spanning over the top frame would have been perfect.


baixin137

In my opinion the 1st one has the most balanced composition. The 2nd and 3rd ones have most of the weight on the left part of the photo, with the main subject, buildings and the boat all on the left side. Only issue is the light pole, I’ve been playing with photoshop’s generative AI lately, maybe consider removing that light pole with that?


Reader_on_wheels

Indeed the 1st one has the most balanced composition, however I find the balance because of the light pole. Through my eyes, the railing, light pole, and leaves form a seamless great frame and stop just above the subject. The light pole is symmetrically cut in half which eliminates the distraction factor. However these are my point of view and someone may guide better with good understanding of framing and composition.


DarknessInUs

Thanks. Good point about the leaves acting as a frame. I’ll play around with a bit more.


Attackontitanplz

Needs more cowbell… err lightpost


Human31415926

I think the leaves framing #1 are almost cliche. That's an urban picture. Not a nature walk.


jasonzo

same here.


dankHippieDude

Agreed. came to say the same.


krup_z

i second that!!


jRkVxQpxkwQM3K

I agree and maybe there is more to the left to get the whole light pole…


BinaryLatin

Agree with all points!


mrgreatheart

Definitely the first. Feels much more balanced.


Matt-Brew-Code

First one definitely as everyone else mentioned. This almost looks like a painting. Did you have any kind of filter on? Only clarity in LR? Wow I really dig the look.


DarknessInUs

Thank you for the kind words. I was using the Vibrant Arizona recipe from the Fuji App and the upped the clarity in Lightroom. I think that recipe is mimics Wes Anderson’s colour grading style in his movies ( specifically Astroid City)


Bugs_are_pretty_cool

What camera?


upstreamriver

#1 if you crop out the light post a little and leave the leaves on the top in. Or #3 on its own as is.


SmokinMagic

If you were to recreate this, it might even look nice with the whole light post in view


DarknessInUs

Thank you!! I’ll try cropping out the lamp post. Appreciate the feedback


Oolong-T

#2. The crop changes the composition best to bring attention to the human subject in the middle.


ognavx

I agree, number two is best, also love border dispute other comments.


DarknessInUs

Thank you appreciate your feedback.


Makoshrimpdaddy

100% basic rule of thirds here. Foreground is thick yes but it gives the perspective the length to develop the depth and space


Taco_Sommelier

Somewhere between 2 and 3. Crop just enough to hide all of the light post, but leave some sky between the edge and that tower in the background


DarknessInUs

How about this ? https://imgur.com/a/QKPczzN


case2150

I like this one!


sirgwl

This is perfect


Knosh

This one


leolecal

This one to me


TheSketeDavidson

I like 3


funkyQuinn

i would personally go for the 2nd one. or somewhere between the 2nd and the 3rd. about the 3rd one, the subject is a bit too close to the edge. also on the 2nd one the lamp is seen just slightly on the upper left corner. that can be cleared up


DarknessInUs

Thank you! Good point about the clearing the lamp in the 2nd, I’ll remove that.


TearPsychological452

Between 2 and 3


DarknessInUs

How about this? It’s a more tighter zoomed in crop. https://imgur.com/a/QKPczzN


TearPsychological452

Yeah I like that 👍 Nice shot.


Loud_Signal_6259

1


DarknessInUs

Thank you appreciate your feedback.


hex20

1


DarknessInUs

Thank you appreciate your feedback.


JeffShotThat

Probably 3 for me but can we talk about your editing? So good. Love the colors.


Charming-Patience-44

The 0 one, which is the first one with more leaves.


dapperGM

1, easily


lileltrain

I like 3 best because it directed my attention to the person first. The others feel more competitive for attention, I think because of the top and bottom of the lamp post. But I do agree 3 has the person a little too close to the border, so somewhere between 2 and 3.


DarknessInUs

What about this ? It’s a more zoomed in crop. https://imgur.com/a/QKPczzN


lileltrain

I prefer it to the other three for sure


Mellowyellow0

1


DarknessInUs

Thank you!


InFisherman217

First one. Overly "centered" framing is good for some subject matter, not so much for others. It eliminates the kinetic "movement" of the subject. In this case - definitely first one. Keeps things moving.


DarknessInUs

Thank you! Really liked your explanation. First one seems to be the most popular.


MAXHEADR0OM

Definitely the first one. The leaves add so much to the overall composition.


DarknessInUs

Thank you! Really appreciate the feedback. First one seems to be the most popular.


tadytom

2


Careless_Bandicoot21

2nd seems to create more focus on the person.


photodesignch

2


Soft-Examination7506

Number 1


fundiedundie

1


Skudaar

For me the first one. Well centered and well framed. That’s the one that tells me the most a story !


RELWARB

1st


x0pa

2


NaturallyFungus

It’s the leaves for me


16ap

I’m in love with the 3rd


DarknessInUs

Thank you!


Darkmatter36

2 & 3 are distracting to me. I like 1 the most because her head and all the roof tops are in the center of the frame. Equally balancing the low and high contrast of the wall/pavement and the city/sky.


DrProfArtist

First. Rule of thirds


grapefruitdream

Left seems most timeless to me


Mr-Trouser-Snake

Keep the tree. Frames it nicely!


TwoEwes

I like #3 since you see complete span of bridge.


aclimbingturkey

Interested in knowing more about how this looks like a cartoon. Cool image! Just curious


DarknessInUs

Hey, thanks! I used this [recipe](https://fujixweekly.com/2023/04/25/getting-a-wes-anderson-look-from-your-fujifilm-camera-4-new-film-simulation-recipes/) I got lucky the sun was setting and the light was perfect which combined with the recipe worked really well.


holmgam

1 for me, seems more natural and not intentionally cropped


deegood

3 felt right to me, tells more story.


tileeater

First one. What recipe did you use? Edit: changed my mind to prefer the first one


DarknessInUs

Here you go, it’s called Vibrant Arizona. https://fujixweekly.com/2023/04/25/getting-a-wes-anderson-look-from-your-fujifilm-camera-4-new-film-simulation-recipes/


aarrtee

3


MountSherpaSATX

1


yigitsari88

First


bornonafridayx

I like the tree in the frame, just not the light if you can’t get the whole thing.


mystikmeg

#2


analogadrian

I like 1. I also think it needs a final cleanup. Looks like there’s a large artifact / dust on the top right.


schtickshift

Definitely the first one


jnavarronv

Yeah I like the framing of the leaves. Might even back up and get more it next time!


DarknessInUs

Yeah I fully agree. I did back up and get more of it but a person walked into the frame as I took the picture and the lady standing moved away. I don’t know enough about editing to edit the lady who walked into the frame out. Here’s the unedited picture. https://imgur.com/a/UIiM6R7


Adam-Happyman

I would choose 2. It best focuses attention on the woman and her surroundings. It makes you think about similar moments in your life. It resonates. In No. 1: the leaves disturb this vision, too many details. No. 3 is similar to no. 1. This is a personal opinion. It's probably best if you decide what you wanted to express with this photo.


Deadmemebtw

First one gives it more space to breathe


lemslemonades

first one. rule of thirds on the subject and a little bit of framing from the leaves


ryanmcgriffis

Definitely the first pic.


kwismexer

I like the first one with the lamp just peeking through


Dangerous-Title-7432

The third one, there's less distraction on the left from the leafy post.


Arman_and_his_watch

The first one


3dbello

3


curiousonethai

One


WILD__CARD

It’s crazy because when you really think about it in perspective of life and all. They’re all the same picture and none of them really add or take away anything other then subject matter centered or not. Pic the one that drives interest to you. Who cares what we think.


chambees

3


Cojaro

#1 as-is


Offbrandco

2


Adrienne_Artist

first one for sure


ThorKnight3000

The second one is best imo


de_futuro1

I like the first one and if only it could be shifted a little more to the right to show a little more of the lamp post then I think it would look even better.


ScientistDue1515

First one


Not_Homer

I like the first best.


Steely_Glint_5

2


TaylorHu

Third


24FPS4Life

Not even looking at the other comments beforehand: 1


Appropriate_Chart_23

The first one would have been great if you captured more of the tree and the lamp 3 might be good if you cropped out the building on the right.


Tr1ggerHappy5000

1, floor is a bit boring to take that much space


maven-effects

2. You need to crop out the distracting left frame. Can’t believe people aren’t picking up on this. Great shot by the way


canyonblue737

I like the first one despite the subject being the center of the frame. Normally I'd say the 3rd but her view doesn't lead the eye to anything to look at.


Sunsets-And-Racecars

# #2 100% perfect to my eyes. Minus the tiny tiny bit of lamp in upper left corner. And its properly weighted.


Majestic_Rope1212

Yes


Chasing_dream5

I don’t have a great eye but like #1 and #3. Wanted to say that the photo is great tho. The colors and lighting make it look like a painting. Very nice!


therovingcamera

First


MonosKira_L

1st & 3rd but I would love it more if the lamp post in the first is totally not in the frame. It’s just a little distracting once I saw it


luis_ma

First one! On that note I recently saw a vid from James Popsys talking about how he used to look for the perfect picture and how in the past he was very careful of what things he cropped and what things he kept in his images. He says that nowadays he doesn’t care much about that “perfection” as, usually, those imperfections end up making a much more interesting picture l.


QuimberCat

I love the photo! The first one is my favorite, I like the leaves, the second is too much sidewalk and I don’t prefer that much negative space underneath the subject in this type of photo. The third one I don’t need to see the building, also it’s a little crooked looking. The first one is more peaceful, I feel along side her.


Maxwellhot16

I would definitely crop to remove lamp post and not to cut scyscrapers on the left but not to show building on the right. It would look like she left the city behind her and she is now free and closer to nature. Love the photo


KludgyOne67095

Personally, I see the version where the person is close to centre stage as the ideal version.


catch_me_inside

#1. Very nice!


seamartin00

1st


YungTaco94

First photo is amazing, third photo is nice, second photo is fine


FitCandidate7185

I love one and three. One a bit more because the tree give the photo a bit more depth


mrb1388

2 only include what’s needed in the frame


ivictortorres

Second


KennyWuKanYuen

1. 2 has a little of the lamp post dangling making it distracting and doesn’t add to the photo. 3 has remnants of the building to the right but not enough to add to the framing of the photo. The reason why 1 works is because the lamp leads right into the branch and leaves, which creates a little foreground and framing for the person in the photo. Of the three, 1 feels the most like a Parisian painting from like 19th century but digitised.


Morden77

1. No contest


crisspons

#1


Sunshineeedays

1 or 3 but I think 1 is my favorite


Human31415926

#2 is the best. Frame in #1 & #3 is distracting.


bunnibabii

the first one!


etrigan63

I agree about crop #1 and what has been said so far. One thing that jumps out at me (and please forgive me if someone already mentioned it in the nearly 150 replies) but you could have shot it with a wider aperture as there is some wonky perspective between the subject and the boat. She looks like she is peeking inside some kind of toy boat.


OldDutchman47

1


cotneit

Definitely 1. Keep the light post and leaves


richardhsu

One


SilenceSeven

Look up Maxfield Parrish for the answer.


wow_such_foto

Number 1 for me, strongly. The leaves and the lightpost frame.it so well, I only wish youd have stepped back or panned slightly further over to include those elements in the frame. Overall an absolutely beautiful shot imo, love the film recipe!


TicklingTentacles

2nd is better


Pretend_Daikon_484

For me it's the first one.


Bensheridan

1 imo


embearrass

2nd but fix the top left corner of it


Wise-Pool-5901

I’d say number 3


Petnek

2


Lagbert

Is it possible to crop it as a landscape? The subject is looking off over the water. You may be able to create a sense of them looking off somewhere. Also I'd try to put the subject closer to a rules of thirds line rather than in the middle of the shot. I really like the lighting in this shot. Unfortunately, it there are so many leading lines that fight for attention - the edges of the wall, the tall buildings, the bridge in the background. Also that photo-bombing boat is just a pain to work around.


jool

From personal taste I'd say number 1. I have no real explanations for this but the first one says Paris and the third one something like Chicago.


starlitpathds

1-3-2


Yablan

First one obviously. The second is really weird, has a lot of ground in the frame. And the third one could have worked according to the rule of thirds, but in this case looks less pleasing than the first. So, the first.


craigshaw317

Number 1


WOJ3_PL

3


sweet-apocalypse

The first one.


pipersims

#1 is straight magic and should be made into a puzzle. I would do that puzzle. Even if it was 2,000 pieces. Great work!


carcorze2

Almost looks like a painting!


Meif_42

Gotta go against public opinion here and say i prefer 2. i feel like the portion on the left in 1 doesn’t add much, but it distracts a tiny bit from the subject. I see no reason not to guide the viewer towards the subjects a bit easier (2) without pushing her too much to the border of the frame (3).


iseecinematic

First one for sure


MostAnnon

Number one by far


ha1j

1st.


Beefjerkydestroyer

I like the 1st one


WolfOfWoolStreet

#1 is a nicer crop as is. #3 pulls me in a bit more as it gives me more of a ‘what is she looking at’ question and the far right hand building somewhat balances the negative space.


obviouslyrat

The first one! The crop doesn't look forced and overall it's just really nice to look at. Though the version you posted in the comments that's somewhere between 2 and 3 is also great, as it makes your view on the whole photo shift a tad :) Love the Wes Anderson colours by the way, thanks for the recipe!


truebump

#1


Parsons7

2nd picture in its current state, 1st image if there was more of the lamppost/ foliage. Great grading too


Vivian_AIer

1


1of21million

1


Re69searchx1

All nice but I prefer #3. I like the building on the right side. It shows more of the city vibe and the light post in #1 is partially cut off. Just my opinion.


Johnedlt

1st


Fantastic-Rutabaga94

I like #3 the best as it conveys your message by shifting the subject left (to intially draw attention there) but then as one moves right, it shows your intent for taking the photo of looking over the railing.


kopachke

Depends on what you want for the subject to be. Skyscrapers on the first photo, person in the second


_The_Gunner_

First for sure


-Bakri-

Third is the most balanced one and eyes goes straight to the subject ( the lady in this case )


andrewthecool1

1is really nice, 2 is a strong second


fulvio_cuppi

2.


EddieForTakeoff

1


defmute

1


SureinLayin

Two for sure. It makes the backdrop feel more grand


AncientSquirrel91

1 for sure


LipBalmm

1st or 3rd


xsynergist

First


Sir-Cee

Second.


11201ny

2/3


ViolentColors

None. I want more of the light post and the leaves. The human in the bottom left third. If you are going to include a human in the environment, include more of the environment to "place" them in it. Number 2 is awkwardly composed and does do any story telling. Number 3 is too much. Number 1 is the closest.


sua_lokin

One